The Legend of Zelda - a poem and story

[madskillzO25]

A cold and lonely night, in the sky, a ray of blue
A spirit sent from way beyond, indeed her name's Nayru
Piercing through the empty sky
Enrich the land of poor
As fast as light she passes by
Giving spirit of the law

Followed by, not close behind
A goddess to cure sin
A shining red you're soon to find
The power belongs to Din
She creates the mountains
oceans, valleys and features of the land
While Farore strikes in green array
Producing creatures in the sand

Hyrule is born, from the gods
coming from thy source
When the three are formed
beat the odds
they call it the Triforce

Power, wisdom, courage
are the keys to be immortal
A demon King is bound to flourish
As he enters through the portal

Summoned by the Deku Tree
A boy must kill the lord
Obtain three special, sacred keys
to wield thy Master Sword


if i get enough good critique i shall continue !

 

[EmilyLovesLink]

Of course continue!! Did you write this yourself? It's fantastic keep going! I loved the parts about the goddesses.

 

[madskillzO25]

thank you emily! I will continue even though no one else seems interested lol
And yes i wrote it!!

Next sequence coming tomorrow

 

[madskillzO25]

A cold and lonely night, in the sky, a ray of blue
A spirit sent from way beyond, indeed her name's Nayru
Piercing through the empty sky
Enrich the land of poor
As fast as light she passes by
Giving spirit of the law

Followed by, not close behind
A goddess to cure sin
A shining red you're soon to find
The power belongs to Din
She creates the mountains
oceans, and features of the land
While Farore strikes in green array
Producing creatures in the sand

Hyrule is born, from the gods
coming from thy source
When the three are formed
beat the odds
they call it the Triforce

Power, wisdom, courage
are the keys to be immortal
A demon King is bound to flourish
As he enters through the portal

Summoned by the Deku Tree
A boy must kill the lord
Obtain three special, sacred keys
to wield thy Master Sword

_New_

You'll meet a man, whose in disguise
With a harp, his name is Sheik
He'll teach you songs
what's right , what's wrong
and medallions you should seek

You're shown the way
the Thief must pay
and suffer for his crime
A sacred light you shall receive
Right before the Door of Time

But first a task awaits you
To see a heart of good
The first sage is awakened
Somewhere deep inside the woods
The fire temple's next
Now two will fill the column
The coin of water is your third
When you plunge into the bottom

The "eye" will guide you through
And the boots create a bed
that will walk across the ocean air
inside the House of Dead

that's it for now!

 

[EmilyLovesLink]

I'm sad more people haven't commented so I hope you aren't discouraged, keep adding to the poem!! That last stanza was cool!

 

[madskillzO25]

I'm sad more people haven't commented so I hope you aren't discouraged, keep adding to the poem!! That last stanza was cool!

That's very sweet of you Emily. Although I hope you are enjoying it and not just being polite. lol I suppose I will continue despite my poor promoting skills and that no one else seems to care. Consider yourself lucky because I am going to write this poem for you! my only fan lol

what part do you think is the best thus far?

 

[EmilyLovesLink]

That's very sweet of you Emily. Although I hope you are enjoying it and not just being polite. lol I suppose I will continue despite my poor promoting skills and that no one else seems to care. Consider yourself lucky because I am going to write this poem for you! my only fan lol

what part do you think is the best thus far?

Someone writing a poem for me- about ZELDA! I think my dreams have come true haha!

I still really love the parts about the goddesses, but I think the new stuff you posted was even more cleverly worded. Are you writing this as you go or do you have it completed?

 

[madskillzO25]

Why thank you. And the wording on the newer material is pretty good, but I see why you like the goddess section. Even in OOT when the Deku Tree tells Link about them, and how they created Hyrule, I thought that cut scene was one of the best.

And you hit the jack pot lol A poem about Zelda is pretty good !! If we went on a date, that first date would be playing a Zelda game of your choice... how's that for being a gentleman lol And yes, I am literally making it up as I go. I'm not sure how much more to add. I think I will finish the temples and and make it quick and then start a new poem on a different game! Hope you continue to read!

 

[hotheadhenry]

Why thank you. And the wording on the newer material is pretty good, but I see why you like the goddess section. Even in OOT when the Deku Tree tells Link about them, and how they created Hyrule, I thought that cut scene was one of the best.

And you hit the jack pot lol A poem about Zelda is pretty good !! If we went on a date, that first date would be playing a Zelda game of your choice... how's that for being a gentleman lol And yes, I am literally making it up as I go. I'm not sure how much more to add. I think I will finish the temples and and make it quick and then start a new poem on a different game! Hope you continue to read!

Has this date happened yet? I've been waiting in anticipation for years at this point and need some resolution. Love the poem by the way!

 

[kwartmaster]

Ganon is Power, zelda is wisdom and Link is courage , zelda isn't all three s powers of the triforce. Green hero clothes always found at the beginning not the end like in Botw. Every legend of zelda has option to change your name except BOTW.